If I let it
It will devour me
Sometimes
I want it
To
Consume me
whole
Turned
from the inside
Out
Monday, June 19, 2006
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15 comments:
Again.....
I wish I could write poetry.
I can't.
I'm awful at it.
Those words are filled with mystery,
So here I sit and wonder,
Where is she headed,
With this poem that makes me ponder?
r martini-- ponder and wonder don't rhyme! LOL. It would be wander! I'm cracking up.
And yeah, I agree the words are very mysterious! You would not believe what I was thinking about when these words found their way into my head.
Thanks for stopping by my blog... and yeah the middle name works out well *wink* *wink*
Keep on going with your poetry.
Ponder and wander..
oooh, what is it? Do tell.
Very nice. Now I wonder what the "it" is. Could be so many things. And I'm especially curious after your comment above.
you are correct.....but a valiant effort with little or no thought......don't you think?
next verse..please.
You are leaving us hanging. Please tell.
I didn't really think there was another verse. I'll have to consider this.
Unless anyone else wants to take a shot?
If I let it
It will devour me
Sometimes
I want it
To
Consume me
whole
Turned
from the inside
Out
Swallowed from the deep
for my mind to keep
Bright as a fire
reaching for heaven and higher
If I were to guess, you were having the big OOhh!
DINGDINGDING...
We have a winner!
And TTQ--nice addition. How in the world do you have time for poetry, aren't you like getting married, um, tomorrow!!!!
I gave up worrying about the wedding last week. If it isn't done or being handled, I can't be bothered! I had a whole year to get it done... I handed out the schedules to the bridal party and now I'm kicking back..
I can't write poetry anymore. but I did write one in college about sex.
it was quite steamy. and lost forever, as the disk that it was on is missing.
darnit.
i know what you mean girl!!!! totally bragging on my blog today.....
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